this is rosevictor from gaia saying come to my blog at the site above
Yeah......
I think you shouldn't downgrade your work, then that's just pulling people away from reading it
Yep I know that Im a Neriot
You don't need to be a genius but you just need to re-read your work again and you'll see the mistakes.
SORRY grammer is really bad when it's comes to writing or typing.
kay I try!
like a baby but you just need to stay with your writing style and just work on the grammar that's all.
Also it doesn't make sense as it some died before the sound of a gunshot...it sounds pretty but there's no meaning, I can't walk you through this
I think you are writing something that is not really your style, your writing is not that bad it's just you need to fix the technical stuff.